Category: Writers Block
She felt my heartbeat and I touched her sol. When we kissed, I tasted forever. It tasted bitter like the aftertaste of lemonade, it also tasted sweet; candy apple sweet. Her tongue was intoxicating. I got lightheaded, and weak in the knees. The picture we must have made. A live lover’s statue, Frozen in the middle of the train station for all to see. We didn’t care though. When we finally did separate and the platform stopped spinning. I opened my mouth to speak and found I had no breath for sound. She smiled at me, and while I had no eyesight for her smile, I could feel her warmth envelop me. It was like standing next to a bonfire on a cold and windy night. Seconds, hours, days, who knows how long we stood there. In her, I felt my own heart beating. She was my heart monitor. If we disconnected I knew my heart would cease. So, I just held on to her. I held on to her for dear life, my dear wife. In some ways I am still holding on. All these years gone by and I can see her still. Her stormy gray eyes, child’s eyes, full of laughter, curiosity, and hope. The nights we spent huddled together for warmth. And the days we spent fasting, feeding only on each others love for substance. Now I am cold. Cold and supperless. How easily she was taken from me. How funny the strong can become weak. The land inherits the meek. Gentle Jesus, meek and mild, you took from me my little child. Pity my simplicity. Suffer her away from me. In my little bed I lye. Heavenly father hear my cry, I’ll love her always, and I love her still. I will see her again, if gods will.
Oh, my. It's really nice! WOW! You get 10 from me, smiles.
df! that's beautiful...and this coming from someone who doesn't like love stories. it's so beautiful.
Thank you both. grins.
Is this a true story?
Hi Df. Wow! That's a good bit of writing there. Good job!
Heavy man,
One of the better writings I've seen in a good while. You have a tallent there.
You can certainly paint vivid images in my mind, that's for sure! *GRIN*
thank you all for your comments.
yaaay, go nemoy. good stuff. hugs, shea
Absolutely 10 plus for its honesty alone.